caught in the air
wow bro excellent work! my name is robin hood and i hope to hear from you maybe youd be interested in what i'd have to say about changing the world. Keep up the hard work. :D see you around. p.s your looking for hope, when all you need to do is believe. now your next question is what :D
Thanks, I think?
P.S.: The first step in changing the world is using correct grammar and punctuation. :P
lemme jump on it!
dam man the chorus is awsome, i want to jump on a verse if you dnt mind.
Thanks man, appreciate the feedback!
hey bro the intro is sick with the little girl talking, it's also a verygood beat but the definitions between the verse and chours i feel could be a bit better. perhaps a little more on the chourus. ima DL and see what i can do with it :D
Thanks a lot! and ya I thought the same really, the Chorus and Verse were both the same length, but a lot of my beats are tester/experimental ones that I post here since I'll never use them.
Thanks a lot though!
MAke it ill
whats up Robin hood from Dwn South, tight flows beat kind of slow. take a song with a chours from me see if you can flow to it. keep movin homie cuz once you stop its bye bye
its a good idea of a song, but it could use more work, hold out some of the notes you sing longer and clearify a bit more :D keep workin though
Thanks for the input! To be honest, I've recorded this song about three or four times, and I have tried elongating different notes throughout the song, and I've found that the quick cut-off is more effective at placing mood and keeping time. I could be more clearer though......
it sounds good i just stole it and gonna throw it on acid pro and thro my mix into it :D keep up the work!
it's pretty good needs some work
yea i realized after uploading and listening to it myself that the bass is AAALLLL fucked up... its got some lyrics i need to record but i dont have a mic yet
lol hell yea teddy another good one, im sitting in my half way studio in austin texas think about how to take over and change the world, lol i'll be writing some more :D
nicee, thanks man
i like the beat bro, one thing that caught my attention was that you rpated the vocals alot. but it sounds alright if its just the set that you used. but if you want to add another vocals i thinkit would sound better with less of the repeat. but thats up to the beat maker and the writer :). but good work man keep it up.
hah yea teddy!
another good one gram, keep it up. man and i'll keep writing so we can make more songs!
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